poem: looking out of a window
the 5th one in the "Oh!" series. my current state.
looking out of a window
Oh! How I love it when the window smiles
The endless blue where fluffy whites fly
and rolling greens for miles and miles
Sweetness, though in my heart is bile.
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looking out of a window
i see you smiling
holding hands and merry
looking out of a window
i see you standing
(but) without me
of course, heart (hati) does produce bile (hempedu). at least ur feeling something...
syaf thanks for your analytical viewpoint. awan thanks for your own version of a similar premise> 'looking out of a window'.
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such an animated window, isn't it? are you sure it's a window, and not a tv?
did you see the sky or was it really me? heheheh
how long you want to look out of the window.... update dear....
over. blog police on the patrol. i was busy.
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