Wednesday, June 23, 2004

poem : dunes

This is one of the poems in the "Oh!" series.

dunes

Oh! Were I that piece of polyester
to touch that dune of flesh
you wear on your desert chest

Calm! My heaving breath.

3 Comments:

Blogger Syafeeq said...

hehe, mine would be

Oh! Were I that piece of polyester
to touch that dune of flesh
you wear on your forest chest

8:40 am  
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9:39 am  
Blogger worknation said...

i think it would be good for people to come up with their own variations. i hope the poem strikes a chord with its reader.

but for me personally, i wrote it to tease a girl in my studio. hehe.

1:42 pm  

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