Puisi Depresan
Bisa ku katup mataku malam ini
Untuk mengangankan dirimu
Biarlah aku tak bangun lagi
Kerna mimpi lebih indah dari fakta hari ini
Dan cerita kita lebih cantik
Bila diputarbalik
Biarlah bantalku ganti bahumu
Dan hamparan selimutku
samaran dakapmu
Tak jemu aku dengan lenaku
Kerna mimpi itu menurut-
Caturan kehendak benakku
Biarlah sawang-sawang
yang menyapu mukaku
Ku kira urai rambutmu
dan harum kemenyan
Wangian kau sembur di badan
Atau serangga yang melata
Ku sangka usapan jemarimu penuh cinta
Mataku tak mahu buka
Kerna kasihmu segar di alam baka.
4 Comments:
ingat F1 - sepang.
Is this self-composed? If so,salute! If not..salute to the composer. Bahasa simple yet indah.
menarik, meaningful dan menyentuh perasaan
awan, i am a bit devastated that mclaren didn't win, buy that wont reduce me to suicidal tendecies.
shaz, thank you for your praises, for it is self-penned. (one nite of sleeping trouble with pen and paper nearby, by your judgement, would prove to be so inspiring)
syaf, thank you. glad to touch. actually i was afraid it would turn out corny hehe.
otherwise, nobody died. but sleeping is akin to dying, if i remember correctly what some ustaz said. i guess it opens to interpretations. i was a bit depressed at the time, though. (oh, by mentioning 'ustaz' i am not THAT religious)
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